Great start!
The lighting in this picture is awesome. Really it is. Most people get colors right and even the right pose, but lighting is usually something left to be desired. The lighting is one point. I'm not sure if this is a character design or a the beginnings of a future picture and a character design, but I would love to see a fantasy background one day!
Just for the hell of it
First art review ever. Anyways, I actually like the use of saturated colors, no mater how silly this picture is lol. It all just feels riiiiigggghhhhttt. Though i can't help but wonder what the symbol in the background is. Also, for a second I had to think about what the gray stuff was, then realized it was actually smoke from the. It's obvious what the picture is about, BUT the smoke having an outline makes it hard to tell that that is smoke immediately, I dunno how serious you were or what the inspiration was for the picture, but I'll treat this like a serious review. You need a bit of work on your shading, but overall, the pictures not bad, lol.
thanks I'll make sure to work on that.
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